(continued) - The logic behind using the starry/ night sky background is clear since it is a game about worlds. And the background selection supports the concept. -The font choice works, though it should be smoothed out a bit. - the color palate is fine. -I do not see how a logo type could be inserted considering the canvas size.
I like the background and the text but I feel like when it transitions and flashes to the next background it happens a little too suddenly, maybe have it fade to the next color.
Looks good, but you could probably dull the colors on the photo background a little, so it doesn't stand out more than the text.
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ReplyDelete- The logic behind using the starry/ night sky background is clear since it is a game about worlds. And the background selection supports the concept.
-The font choice works, though it should be smoothed out a bit.
- the color palate is fine.
-I do not see how a logo type could be inserted considering the canvas size.
Nice design and animation. Maybe change the outline color to a slightly darker shade of green.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like the transitions are too quick; all the effects happen a little rapidly. I like the effect where the shadow grows.
ReplyDeleteI like the background and the text but I feel like when it transitions and flashes to the next background it happens a little too suddenly, maybe have it fade to the next color.
ReplyDeleteAnimation is well done but it looks too fast and choppy. I would slow it down a bit and add some more effects rather than just the color flash.
ReplyDeleteAnimation is done nicely just a little choppy.
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