Tuesday, March 25, 2014
PROJECT 8-Participation
The pixels on the right side of cube can be smoothed out and not in excess. http://ademos-gdd110.blogspot.com
The floors a little funky. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/
The block seems a little odd on its right side. https://edleclair32-gdd110.blogspot.com
The floor is a little odd. http://cryowan-gdd110.blogspot.com/
The floors a little funky. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/
The block seems a little odd on its right side. https://edleclair32-gdd110.blogspot.com
The floor is a little odd. http://cryowan-gdd110.blogspot.com/
Monday, March 24, 2014
PROJECT 7-Participation
Slowing down the effects on the title would enhance the experience.
http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/
The concept is good, but the timing is a little off. Maybe increasing the
timing at the beginning more will give it a better feel. dnkhan-gdd110.blogspot.com
I like it a lot. I think everything flows pretty well and it is enhanced
effectively. https://edleclair32-gdd110.blogspot.com
The overall concept is nice, but I think it could gain a lot from so
additional, images, transitions, etc.. mmensher-GDD110.blogspot.com
Simple and nice. Maybe add one more thing that makes it stand out though.
rperricelli-GDD110.blogspot.com
Its nice, but seems to lack in quality and tightness. The logic is a
little off. http://jverducci-gdd110.blogspot.com/
I like the logo a lot. The fade to white though may be a turn off. http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com
Its nice, but a little to simple and the timing is to long. http://cryowan-gdd110.blogspot.com
In order to improve my design, I could make the text stand out more in contrast to the background image. Also, a change in the color of the drop shadow to maybe green could help it seem more blend in. Lastly, the timing could be slowed down so the frames are not as rapid.
In order to improve my design, I could make the text stand out more in contrast to the background image. Also, a change in the color of the drop shadow to maybe green could help it seem more blend in. Lastly, the timing could be slowed down so the frames are not as rapid.
Tuesday, March 18, 2014
PROJECT 7-Presentation
I looked at Olivia G., Matt F., Brian E., Ralph P., Evan L., Alex W., Joe V., and Matt M.'s animated game/company logo.
Monday, March 17, 2014
Tuesday, March 4, 2014
Monday, March 3, 2014
PROJECT 5-Participation
None - http://ademos-gdd110.blogspot.com
Good, you can probably find a few me colors in each of them though.- bheisenberg-GDD110.blogspot.com
A lot of the pictures in the mood boards look very similar to each other. It would be nice to see the range of the concept you are showing off. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/
The mood boards could be a little more organized to get rid of the white space.
http://ogutierrez-gdd110.blogspot.com
You should add more images to each mood board. It will get the concept across more.
dnkhan-gdd110.blogspot.com
Great job, maybe just tighten up the mood boards to create less excess space.
https://edleclair32-gdd110.blogspot.com
I would add more images to each mood board to get the range of the concept across.
mmensher-GDD110.blogspot.com
The swatches seem a little unorganized, besides that maybe just a few more pictures and it'll be good. rperricelli-GDD110.blogspot.com
I like the dinosaur, just add a few more images and it would be very good.
http://jverducci-gdd110.blogspot.com/
Good job, just a couple more images on each mood board would be better.
http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com
None - http://cryowan-gdd110.blogspot.com/
In order to improve my mood boards, I would consider changing the swatches from a checkerboard theme to align next to one another. I would also try to add a few more swatches to some of the mood boards. For instance, I would try and add some more orange, red, and yellow to the second mood board to get the theme of fire in there.
Good, you can probably find a few me colors in each of them though.- bheisenberg-GDD110.blogspot.com
A lot of the pictures in the mood boards look very similar to each other. It would be nice to see the range of the concept you are showing off. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/
The mood boards could be a little more organized to get rid of the white space.
http://ogutierrez-gdd110.blogspot.com
You should add more images to each mood board. It will get the concept across more.
dnkhan-gdd110.blogspot.com
Great job, maybe just tighten up the mood boards to create less excess space.
https://edleclair32-gdd110.blogspot.com
I would add more images to each mood board to get the range of the concept across.
mmensher-GDD110.blogspot.com
The swatches seem a little unorganized, besides that maybe just a few more pictures and it'll be good. rperricelli-GDD110.blogspot.com
I like the dinosaur, just add a few more images and it would be very good.
http://jverducci-gdd110.blogspot.com/
Good job, just a couple more images on each mood board would be better.
http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com
None - http://cryowan-gdd110.blogspot.com/
In order to improve my mood boards, I would consider changing the swatches from a checkerboard theme to align next to one another. I would also try to add a few more swatches to some of the mood boards. For instance, I would try and add some more orange, red, and yellow to the second mood board to get the theme of fire in there.
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