Maybe a little more of an introduction
to Runescape so players who have not played the original game will know some of
the mechanics. bheisenberg-gdd110.blogspot.com
Maybe explain how Tag, Hide and Seek,
and Manhunt tie in to Prison Break.
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Check some spelling and grammar errors.
Add some "fluff" to make it more intriguing. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/
In order to improve my Game Pitch Document, I will add some images and discuss the theory behind my concept a little more. The addition of images will allow me to better connect to the audience and show off my concept. Lastly, I can rely how ping-pong and basketball actually relate to my design. I can further give evidence as to why the game has a diverse setting and adaptable play style.
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