Good use of color and contrast. I like how the images make your eyes move through the page, first on the right of the text, then on the left. I think the second image has been distorted, the font should be changed so that the paragraphs are not in all caps, and the font should not be center justified.
It would be good to break up the text with titles or dividers, so it does not end up as the dreaded "wall-of-text". Also, you should use left alignment on the bodies of the text, and maybe choose a different font as this one is hard to focus on.
I like the layout a lot, but the colors seem off-putting to me, try and play around with your color scheme.
ReplyDeleteGood description but a font with both uppercase and lowercase letters would look nicer.
ReplyDeleteGood use of color and contrast. I like how the images make your eyes move through the page, first on the right of the text, then on the left. I think the second image has been distorted, the font should be changed so that the paragraphs are not in all caps, and the font should not be center justified.
ReplyDeleteI really like the images, maybe fix the text and color choices a bit?
ReplyDeleteThe images are really small, maybe make them a little larger If possible, also fix your text so that it is either right aligned or left aligned.
ReplyDeleteIt would be good to break up the text with titles or dividers, so it does not end up as the dreaded "wall-of-text". Also, you should use left alignment on the bodies of the text, and maybe choose a different font as this one is hard to focus on.
ReplyDeleteI would use different colors and use different font sizes to make the page more exciting.
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