The bottom text seems a little tight. I like the form, maybe just restructure it to look even. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com
Really love it. If you space it out a little bit more I bet it would be perfect.
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I like the design. Only negative is that some of the graphics do not seem relevant. Could be more specific to your design. http://dnkhan-gdd110.blogspot.com
I like the design. A little more explanation during the presentation would have been nice though.
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Kinda squeezed in the text for the bottom image. Make use of the white space at the bottom more too. http://mmensher-gdd110.blogspot.com
Some of the text is a little tight. http://rperricelli-gdd110.blogspot.com
Space it out a little more and it will appear more clean.
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Add a little more "fluff". It drawl the eye more and grab more attention.
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I could improve my design by possibly reconsidering the chosen font. I could use it to make the words pop out more. Also, the contrast or color scheme could be altered to emphasize different area's more and drawl the eye. More so, I could center my paragraphs to be more organized to help others read the document. Lastly, I should probably make sure the images are appropriately put into the document so it does not look distorted.
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