The stick figures could be better drawn. The limbs do not connect most of the time. When they do, they lack the depth shown in class. Otherwise, the storyboard is clear and the rest of the drawling makes sense. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com
My Storyboard:
In order to improve my storyboard, I could make the sizes of the sticks figures more relative in each panel. Sometimes the size of one of the figures changes from tall to short. Otherwise, I could work on shading the walls and flooring more so and focus on giving a little more detail. Besides that, may be some of the limbs could be better drawn and more clear.
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